How'd you train all those pigeons to fly away on cue. Pigeontastic picture!
July 1, 2008
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Elfie
On a serious note Fowler!
One word..MINT :D
xx
July 2, 2008
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Jaikido
Looks great. Not as good as Jenna looks but it's only a film ;-)
July 2, 2008
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Beefy
Fowler a luv it mate!!!!
Awesome is only word that comes to mind!!!!
July 3, 2008
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DonnaKebab
I love this, Full of awesomenosity :D Nice one Mark!!! :D
DK!
July 3, 2008
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well done mark
July 4, 2008
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LR
Very good Anth, Nice x
July 5, 2008
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Neil
hahaha mint! although if ya dropped that ring on Ettrick Grove in reality it wud b gone by the charvas or crows in 2 seconds!
July 7, 2008
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jules88
Brilliant, well done mark
July 8, 2008
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Mkla37
Great idea, nice work
July 8, 2008
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soldier
cool film
July 21, 2008
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jollywobble
There's some great shotmaking here. There were for me a few timing problems at the beginning, for instance with the speed the cyclist got up (why didn't he call out?) and how long it took him to take up the chase, and it seemed to me that by not getting a shot of the woman's face on sight of the ring an opportunity was missed. Would she not have jumped to the conclusion that all of that was part of the proposal staging? Would the man have played along with that assumption? These are minor niggles however. It's a good piece of work.
July 21, 2008
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daveb
Hi there, really like the idea well done
July 22, 2008
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SteveJo
I really enjoyed this, would have liked to see a reaction from the woman also as others have mentioned, nice work though
July 22, 2008
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hells-bells
well done mark this is really good mate good luck :) xxx
July 22, 2008
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hells-bells
well done mark this is really good mate good luck :) xxx
July 22, 2008
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mark
This is simply a comment to say thank you to everyone who helped with the making of this.
July 22, 2008
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craigmaster
Very impressed with this Mark I really enjoyed it, great work
July 23, 2008
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July 23, 2008
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call-me-stacey
Well done
July 23, 2008
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What was the point in this short?
Soem great bit of kit were used of that i have no doubt, but i didnt care about the guy on the bike or the guy that actually lost the ring.
There was no reason to care as there was no introduction to either of them nor was there any acting !
Total shame as there is obviously some talent in your pool and you have access to soem great kit but this peice is a total waste of time.
Re think and do some more work in building characters next time and 'finish' the project rather than slap it together.
July 23, 2008
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great stuff
July 23, 2008
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kimberly
I really liked it, didnt think there was any need for a proper introduction to the characters its self explanitory. great!
July 23, 2008
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kagfilm
This bored me.
one of the commetns above says no need for intro? What a fool! Without any depth or intro to characters there is no emapthy or interest in them
As such its ointless because you dont care.
RUBBISH
July 23, 2008
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sallyd6
Good work mark
July 23, 2008
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This comment is not praising the film as I am the producer of it so I will leave the film to speak for itself. I am posting this regarding a couple of comments posted above. I would generally take criticism on board as its something to expect in this industry. But, due to the comment coming across as been done by someone I must know, and the spelling mistakes. I am taking this as someone who has sour grapes towards myself and my fellow filmmakers it annoys me that they would stoop so low to publicly slander the film when there was know need to. Though I have my su@#*!ions I am not going to publicly name the people as I am not going to get into a slanging match about it. I just feel that whoever it is would grow up a little and be happy that where trying to achieve something
July 23, 2008
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Ste
this is mint! really well put together like! i even got a cameo lol! AMAZIN!
July 23, 2008
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mags
good short film the story was still able to be told well with just a musical soundtrack a good deed by the cylist moral of this short story there are still some good honest people out there.
July 23, 2008
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An interesting premise, and strong on the tech front, but plot and character deficiencies let it down.
July 24, 2008
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Levise
Pretty damn crap to be honest...the fancy technical equipment to me spells 'EGO' and any monkey with access to said equipment can make their film look 'amazing'. The film-makers minds were clearly focusing on their crane shots than what was going on in the film which could have been handled much much better by a much much more capable director.
All in all GOOD camerawork BAD everything else.
July 25, 2008
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How is this #1? It's not rubbish but there's no depth to it at all.
July 26, 2008
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Nice idea but the performances are awful and there's no substance at all. Shame.
July 26, 2008
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ktcock
haha great shout, jenna u were right u cant fooking act! haha. luvit though! xxxx
I enjoyed watching this short. Liked the idea, and still worked with a short time frame.
Reading other comments above there seem to be some bitter people out there, looking to spoil things for others which is a shame.
July 28, 2008
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Its true there are a few rough comments here, but in that respect youve got off lightly as there are others which have taken a real caning for no reason. Youve got some good constructive comments that point out whats missing and its worth paying attention to them the rest you can ignore. Things balance out over a bit of time and the good stuff finds its way tp the top and the bad stuff sinks, except for where someone inflates there own film by getting mates to vote them up and hack down the oposition but even that dont last forever.
July 28, 2008
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linz
cool
July 29, 2008
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gustbuns
I think it's a shame you have been targetted by the idiots who are doing the same thing elsewhere. It's got a fair bit to recommend itself so it's unfair for people to attack your film so mindlessly. I think there are some weaknesses to it so I wouldn't praise it unreservedly, but you have made a fair crack at producing something of quality and that is to be admired. What a shame there is no way to moderate those with an axe to grind!
July 30, 2008
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not bad
July 30, 2008
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tom
not good enough it wouls seem though.
July 30, 2008
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filmed well enough but by the end I still didn't care whether he caught him or just chipped off down the pawn shop.
July 30, 2008
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leightonsmythe
Looks like you have been attacked by our initials man as well. Horrible little toad.
This isn't my favourite film bbut it os technically very good.
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lilkaty
Hehe i like it! jenna u film star!!! x
July 1, 2008
Report this commentBeastMaster
How'd you train all those pigeons to fly away on cue. Pigeontastic picture!
July 1, 2008
Report this commentElfie
On a serious note Fowler!
One word..MINT :D
xx
July 2, 2008
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Looks great. Not as good as Jenna looks but it's only a film ;-)
July 2, 2008
Report this commentBeefy
Fowler a luv it mate!!!!
Awesome is only word that comes to mind!!!!
July 3, 2008
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I love this, Full of awesomenosity :D Nice one Mark!!! :D
DK!
July 3, 2008
Report this commentwell done mark
July 4, 2008
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Very good Anth, Nice x
July 5, 2008
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hahaha mint! although if ya dropped that ring on Ettrick Grove in reality it wud b gone by the charvas or crows in 2 seconds!
July 7, 2008
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Brilliant, well done mark
July 8, 2008
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Great idea, nice work
July 8, 2008
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cool film
July 21, 2008
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There's some great shotmaking here. There were for me a few timing problems at the beginning, for instance with the speed the cyclist got up (why didn't he call out?) and how long it took him to take up the chase, and it seemed to me that by not getting a shot of the woman's face on sight of the ring an opportunity was missed. Would she not have jumped to the conclusion that all of that was part of the proposal staging? Would the man have played along with that assumption? These are minor niggles however. It's a good piece of work.
July 21, 2008
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Hi there, really like the idea well done
July 22, 2008
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I really enjoyed this, would have liked to see a reaction from the woman also as others have mentioned, nice work though
July 22, 2008
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well done mark this is really good mate good luck :) xxx
July 22, 2008
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well done mark this is really good mate good luck :) xxx
July 22, 2008
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This is simply a comment to say thank you to everyone who helped with the making of this.
July 22, 2008
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Very impressed with this Mark I really enjoyed it, great work
July 23, 2008
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merde
July 23, 2008
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Well done
July 23, 2008
Report this commentWhat was the point in this short?
Soem great bit of kit were used of that i have no doubt, but i didnt care about the guy on the bike or the guy that actually lost the ring.
There was no reason to care as there was no introduction to either of them nor was there any acting !
Total shame as there is obviously some talent in your pool and you have access to soem great kit but this peice is a total waste of time.
Re think and do some more work in building characters next time and 'finish' the project rather than slap it together.
July 23, 2008
Report this commentgreat stuff
July 23, 2008
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I really liked it, didnt think there was any need for a proper introduction to the characters its self explanitory. great!
July 23, 2008
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This bored me.
one of the commetns above says no need for intro? What a fool! Without any depth or intro to characters there is no emapthy or interest in them
As such its ointless because you dont care.
RUBBISH
July 23, 2008
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Good work mark
July 23, 2008
Report this commentThis comment is not praising the film as I am the producer of it so I will leave the film to speak for itself. I am posting this regarding a couple of comments posted above. I would generally take criticism on board as its something to expect in this industry. But, due to the comment coming across as been done by someone I must know, and the spelling mistakes. I am taking this as someone who has sour grapes towards myself and my fellow filmmakers it annoys me that they would stoop so low to publicly slander the film when there was know need to. Though I have my su@#*!ions I am not going to publicly name the people as I am not going to get into a slanging match about it. I just feel that whoever it is would grow up a little and be happy that where trying to achieve something
July 23, 2008
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this is mint! really well put together like! i even got a cameo lol! AMAZIN!
July 23, 2008
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good short film the story was still able to be told well with just a musical soundtrack a good deed by the cylist moral of this short story there are still some good honest people out there.
July 23, 2008
Report this commentAn interesting premise, and strong on the tech front, but plot and character deficiencies let it down.
July 24, 2008
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Pretty damn crap to be honest...the fancy technical equipment to me spells 'EGO' and any monkey with access to said equipment can make their film look 'amazing'. The film-makers minds were clearly focusing on their crane shots than what was going on in the film which could have been handled much much better by a much much more capable director.
All in all GOOD camerawork BAD everything else.
July 25, 2008
Report this commentHow is this #1? It's not rubbish but there's no depth to it at all.
July 26, 2008
Report this commentNice idea but the performances are awful and there's no substance at all. Shame.
July 26, 2008
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haha great shout, jenna u were right u cant fooking act! haha. luvit though! xxxx
July 26, 2008
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Well done .... nice short film ....
July 26, 2008
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good job guys. Impressed I am
July 26, 2008
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brilliant film well done
July 26, 2008
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nice film
July 26, 2008
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fab film tom from aunty jackie
July 27, 2008
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I enjoyed watching this short. Liked the idea, and still worked with a short time frame.
Reading other comments above there seem to be some bitter people out there, looking to spoil things for others which is a shame.
July 28, 2008
Report this commentIts true there are a few rough comments here, but in that respect youve got off lightly as there are others which have taken a real caning for no reason. Youve got some good constructive comments that point out whats missing and its worth paying attention to them the rest you can ignore. Things balance out over a bit of time and the good stuff finds its way tp the top and the bad stuff sinks, except for where someone inflates there own film by getting mates to vote them up and hack down the oposition but even that dont last forever.
July 28, 2008
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cool
July 29, 2008
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I think it's a shame you have been targetted by the idiots who are doing the same thing elsewhere. It's got a fair bit to recommend itself so it's unfair for people to attack your film so mindlessly. I think there are some weaknesses to it so I wouldn't praise it unreservedly, but you have made a fair crack at producing something of quality and that is to be admired. What a shame there is no way to moderate those with an axe to grind!
July 30, 2008
Report this commentnot bad
July 30, 2008
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not good enough it wouls seem though.
July 30, 2008
Report this commentfilmed well enough but by the end I still didn't care whether he caught him or just chipped off down the pawn shop.
July 30, 2008
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Looks like you have been attacked by our initials man as well. Horrible little toad.
This isn't my favourite film bbut it os technically very good.
July 31, 2008
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This is great!
August 1, 2008
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