Really like the look of this and the music works well with it.
June 30, 2008
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Joe
Film's premise sparks emotions that engage the viewer, leaving one wanting to know so much more. Brilliant!
June 30, 2008
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Scott
It struck me as sad when I found out one of the girls was really dead and it was perhaps her ghost.
June 30, 2008
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Janine G
This is a beautiful, well put together film. It makes you want to see what happens next. Top marks!
June 30, 2008
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paul h.
Terrific writing, great twist!
June 30, 2008
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Mary McKevett
Moody & unsettling. A great story with an unexpected ending. Excellent!
June 30, 2008
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flamingo
wicked. good music.intriguing..
June 30, 2008
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Rambo
dull,
predictable, very bad sound
example of very amateur film makers and performers
shame
June 30, 2008
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Really great concept, big suspense and excellent pay off.
July 1, 2008
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Ei
Packs a great emotional punch. Brillant writing and atmospheric filming and music all work well together.
July 1, 2008
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peter
very impressive,emotional and musical.it is brilliant.
July 1, 2008
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andreaberger
Very thrilling!
July 1, 2008
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puttyfoot
what a lovely story... so much said and felt in such a short space of time = well done!
July 1, 2008
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Molerai
This is the best wee film I have ever seen! Very moving, such beautiful writing and such emotive music. A real tear jerker!
July 1, 2008
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rick
Really elegant little movie, amazingly tight three acts played out in 2&1/2 minutes and a single location. Love it!
July 1, 2008
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dana
fabulous!
July 1, 2008
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wedad hamdy
fantastic!
July 2, 2008
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VERY POIGNANT SHORT FILM - LOVED THE MUSIC AND SETTING
July 2, 2008
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bluejean
Beautiful short story which makes you want to watch more.Well written with nice music.excellant
July 2, 2008
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lorraine
enigmatic;looking forward to the longer short
July 2, 2008
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anna
What a weird and wonderfully awkward moment. The human condition captured! Nice work.
July 4, 2008
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Stephen
beautiful
July 4, 2008
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Amazing
July 4, 2008
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Martyn
Sound quality did not do it justice
July 4, 2008
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Susan
the simplicity of imagery and music helped emphasise that wish to hold someone you've lost, tightly, for one more time... great storyline eroded a little through the background noise (cars) as this made it difficult to hear the dialogue
July 5, 2008
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excellent, beautifully crafted.
There was no requirement for dialogue (which was difficult to make out), the soundtrack conveyed both emotion and context. Excellent viewing.
July 5, 2008
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JK
Very moving. A little gem.
July 5, 2008
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elheckser
a fantastic piece, the music compliments it well.
keep it up
July 6, 2008
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carterboy
I liked the music, but too slow moving for me, even though its well shot
July 6, 2008
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Andy
beautifully shot and genuinely touching. memorable, well done.
July 6, 2008
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kelly2
I liked the idea but I had to read the synopsis to work out what was going on. The characters also jump around in the composition which makes it a bit hard to read at times. The sound was also very quite and hard to hear at times. I had to scrub through it a few times to make sure the woman in black was definitely two different people. They look very similar and because you can't see the picture in the paper very clearly it's hard to say that it is the dead sister at the start. Perhaps it's because it's on a small screen? I think I would have been clearer if the woman looked more different, again maybe it's because it's on a small screen. I liked how you introduced her coming out of the blur. Did you show your film to anyone other than friends and relatives who knew the story before you finished it? Feedback from a fresh eye is very important. In the end I found the story a bit unclear, which is a shame because I think the idea was very good. I hope that was constructive feedback.
July 9, 2008
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This film was made especially for Virgin Media shorts - filmed one week before, editied and only uploaded just in time to meet the deadline. Apparently the master tape is better. Thanks for your feedback.
July 9, 2008
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FJLazem
2 minutes and 39 seconds packed with so much detail and emotion, well done!
July 10, 2008
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MartinTreanor
Nice work people - suitably creepy, yet thought provoking. The music worked a charm.
Bring us more...
Martin
July 10, 2008
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oneOfTheCreator
Thank you! Finally someone notice the cut is jumping. Phew.
It's basic screen grammar. I won't say because of short of times etc therefore it's bad. I will continue to make film at this pace.
All I am going to say is this - can you make a film 2:39 seconds (shooting time 2 hours 30 minutes - all cast meet 48 hours prior to the shoot) about 3 days in the post - the first cut got completely destroy and redo from ground up 24 hours before the deadline.
Thank you for all the constructive criticism.
Let me borrow from my favor director - The next will be better :)
July 10, 2008
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What an incredible film. So moving, eerie and captivating after just a few minutes - I have never seen a film be so poignant in such a short space of time.
The girl also looks like a different person after she has been hugged. Maybe that is my imagination playing tricks on me?
July 11, 2008
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Navigator
Very nicely done. A pleasure to watch.
July 11, 2008
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Warren
Nice work Harriet... we should co-write something together!
Wx
July 12, 2008
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Sharon
Excellent and thought provoking piece, really enjoyed.
A very touching idea. Some good shots and focal effects. Have a look at our entry, "Mr. Alice" (filmed and edited in two days), and let us know what you think!
July 14, 2008
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Azmae
great script and music. strong emotive content - really well done.
July 14, 2008
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gabor
Loved it. Smart and nicely done, amazing to look at. Great acting.
Keep on making them!
July 15, 2008
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esedani
Comps to you Joel and the rest of the crew...
Great performances from all, especially the living sister, though she does get the screentime too! I take it your dof adaptor was used and pictures look great and true to the intimate feel of the story. Like the confusion theme all along, would have liked the revelation of the sister's death in paper to have been clearer/more screentime or CU of picture in the cut. Audio quality and mix let it down unfortunately.
July 17, 2008
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julianne
Despite the flaw in sound, this works well and is quite an emotional film. Short be shortlisted.
July 18, 2008
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INTERESTING...LIKED THE MUSIC AND SCRIPT. IT IS VERY MOVING. WELL DONE
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whitlesstours
Stunning visuals and concept.
June 30, 2008
Report this commentReally like the look of this and the music works well with it.
June 30, 2008
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Film's premise sparks emotions that engage the viewer, leaving one wanting to know so much more. Brilliant!
June 30, 2008
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It struck me as sad when I found out one of the girls was really dead and it was perhaps her ghost.
June 30, 2008
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This is a beautiful, well put together film. It makes you want to see what happens next. Top marks!
June 30, 2008
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Terrific writing, great twist!
June 30, 2008
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Moody & unsettling. A great story with an unexpected ending. Excellent!
June 30, 2008
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wicked. good music.intriguing..
June 30, 2008
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dull,
predictable, very bad sound
example of very amateur film makers and performers
shame
June 30, 2008
Report this commentReally great concept, big suspense and excellent pay off.
July 1, 2008
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Packs a great emotional punch. Brillant writing and atmospheric filming and music all work well together.
July 1, 2008
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very impressive,emotional and musical.it is brilliant.
July 1, 2008
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Very thrilling!
July 1, 2008
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what a lovely story... so much said and felt in such a short space of time = well done!
July 1, 2008
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This is the best wee film I have ever seen! Very moving, such beautiful writing and such emotive music. A real tear jerker!
July 1, 2008
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Really elegant little movie, amazingly tight three acts played out in 2&1/2 minutes and a single location. Love it!
July 1, 2008
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fabulous!
July 1, 2008
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fantastic!
July 2, 2008
Report this commentVERY POIGNANT SHORT FILM - LOVED THE MUSIC AND SETTING
July 2, 2008
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Beautiful short story which makes you want to watch more.Well written with nice music.excellant
July 2, 2008
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enigmatic;looking forward to the longer short
July 2, 2008
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What a weird and wonderfully awkward moment. The human condition captured! Nice work.
July 4, 2008
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beautiful
July 4, 2008
Report this commentAmazing
July 4, 2008
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Sound quality did not do it justice
July 4, 2008
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the simplicity of imagery and music helped emphasise that wish to hold someone you've lost, tightly, for one more time... great storyline eroded a little through the background noise (cars) as this made it difficult to hear the dialogue
July 5, 2008
Report this commentexcellent, beautifully crafted.
There was no requirement for dialogue (which was difficult to make out), the soundtrack conveyed both emotion and context. Excellent viewing.
July 5, 2008
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Very moving. A little gem.
July 5, 2008
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a fantastic piece, the music compliments it well.
keep it up
July 6, 2008
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I liked the music, but too slow moving for me, even though its well shot
July 6, 2008
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beautifully shot and genuinely touching. memorable, well done.
July 6, 2008
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I liked the idea but I had to read the synopsis to work out what was going on. The characters also jump around in the composition which makes it a bit hard to read at times. The sound was also very quite and hard to hear at times. I had to scrub through it a few times to make sure the woman in black was definitely two different people. They look very similar and because you can't see the picture in the paper very clearly it's hard to say that it is the dead sister at the start. Perhaps it's because it's on a small screen? I think I would have been clearer if the woman looked more different, again maybe it's because it's on a small screen. I liked how you introduced her coming out of the blur. Did you show your film to anyone other than friends and relatives who knew the story before you finished it? Feedback from a fresh eye is very important. In the end I found the story a bit unclear, which is a shame because I think the idea was very good. I hope that was constructive feedback.
July 9, 2008
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This film was made especially for Virgin Media shorts - filmed one week before, editied and only uploaded just in time to meet the deadline. Apparently the master tape is better. Thanks for your feedback.
July 9, 2008
Report this commentFJLazem
2 minutes and 39 seconds packed with so much detail and emotion, well done!
July 10, 2008
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Nice work people - suitably creepy, yet thought provoking. The music worked a charm.
Bring us more...
Martin
July 10, 2008
Report this commentoneOfTheCreator
Thank you! Finally someone notice the cut is jumping. Phew.
It's basic screen grammar. I won't say because of short of times etc therefore it's bad. I will continue to make film at this pace.
All I am going to say is this - can you make a film 2:39 seconds (shooting time 2 hours 30 minutes - all cast meet 48 hours prior to the shoot) about 3 days in the post - the first cut got completely destroy and redo from ground up 24 hours before the deadline.
Thank you for all the constructive criticism.
Let me borrow from my favor director - The next will be better :)
July 10, 2008
Report this commentWhat an incredible film. So moving, eerie and captivating after just a few minutes - I have never seen a film be so poignant in such a short space of time.
The girl also looks like a different person after she has been hugged. Maybe that is my imagination playing tricks on me?
July 11, 2008
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Very nicely done. A pleasure to watch.
July 11, 2008
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Nice work Harriet... we should co-write something together!
Wx
July 12, 2008
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Excellent and thought provoking piece, really enjoyed.
July 12, 2008
Report this commentmanalivestudios
A very touching idea. Some good shots and focal effects. Have a look at our entry, "Mr. Alice" (filmed and edited in two days), and let us know what you think!
July 14, 2008
Report this commentAzmae
great script and music. strong emotive content - really well done.
July 14, 2008
Report this commentgabor
Loved it. Smart and nicely done, amazing to look at. Great acting.
Keep on making them!
July 15, 2008
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Comps to you Joel and the rest of the crew...
Great performances from all, especially the living sister, though she does get the screentime too! I take it your dof adaptor was used and pictures look great and true to the intimate feel of the story. Like the confusion theme all along, would have liked the revelation of the sister's death in paper to have been clearer/more screentime or CU of picture in the cut. Audio quality and mix let it down unfortunately.
July 17, 2008
Report this commentjulianne
Despite the flaw in sound, this works well and is quite an emotional film. Short be shortlisted.
July 18, 2008
Report this commentINTERESTING...LIKED THE MUSIC AND SCRIPT. IT IS VERY MOVING. WELL DONE
July 21, 2008
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