I am twenty eight years old and have made several low budget shorts. Among these are WORDS and WISHES. I have written four feature length screenplays but none are produced. I wish to receive funding for another short which i am writing before i attempt to find funding for a feature script which i also wrote. My goal is to be a successful writer/director.
A Great little film very good angles and great acting by the girl in blue, Very true words can be very powerful whether we know it or not very well done on the film
she has every right to be paranoid. no man goes for dinner with guys unless theyre called Elton. nice flick however, though to be honest i thought she outclassed the dress. kind of Matalanish for me
June 19, 2008
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Jules
Very good... The emotion comes through quite well.
Good acting and cool camera angles.
June 22, 2008
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penguin
I wanted to see more. Very professional camerawork there and captured atmosphere very well. Whoever discovers you will be the genius. What was the budget and how long is entire film?
July 18, 2008
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toothpasteandme
Very emotional film. I enjoyed it and its something i would love to watch after work. A perfect family film. Well done.
July 18, 2008
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phillipwards
nice. The plant shot was cool
July 18, 2008
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jane
This was slow but very nice. Great ambience. Keep up the good work
July 18, 2008
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misscream
i dont know why she was so upset but that was nice. good acting and orginal directing
July 18, 2008
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sammy
that was great. The way u left the camera sitting on her captured the emotion brilliantly. You are different from other formulaic directors. I like it.
sammy
July 18, 2008
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alisonb
i cried when i saw this. You have talent. good luck
July 18, 2008
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rosy
this was the best. very talented filmmaker here. I will look out for you in the future
July 18, 2008
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remi
i am a filmmaker myself and i know talent. This was talent. Enough said.
July 18, 2008
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nikki
i kinda liked this one.
July 18, 2008
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jameskilpore
Im not sure about the camera being so long on her but the plant scene was original. Good directing.
July 18, 2008
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ashleym
after seein your scary film i had to see your others. This was very different. good though :)
July 18, 2008
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planes
the girls very pretty. you directed her very well. you have great talent and i will look out for your films.
July 18, 2008
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jacky
mmmmm.....very nice film. Nice atmospehre.
July 18, 2008
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thewaytojungle
This was a nice film. Great music too. Suits the scene. Words can effect a person when they are vulnerable.
Not only was your film good but it also gave us a moral message. I love this one.
July 18, 2008
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rob
can someone please tell me why this one wasnt in the final? This was brilliant. Im hoping for you mate. Good work. very cool PLANT SCENE too.
July 18, 2008
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heyyou
i agree with rob. WHY WASNT THIS IN FINAL?? That plant scene was all that was needed to win. boo to virgin.
July 18, 2008
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giraffe
the girls acting was superb. well done
July 18, 2008
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ateam
this was so sad. very cool film. wheres the longer version?? Hope you win.
July 18, 2008
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shelly
this was heartbreaking. Great little film. Hope you make finals.
July 18, 2008
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brian
i loved the way u moved camera past plant. nice. thats girls nice too.
July 18, 2008
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jordan
this was fantastic camerawork.
July 18, 2008
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buncheese
i found this one very interesting. Something about it draws me in. I think you have talent monsterman. Do you have your own site for your films? i would love to see them. Maybe youtube?
July 18, 2008
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filmer
awesome
July 18, 2008
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cutesocks
I almost cried when i heard the music. Very sad film
July 18, 2008
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misschickonsticks
this should win.
July 18, 2008
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hoppy
this is TALENT. good luck monsterman
July 18, 2008
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jackson
nice. very nice.
July 18, 2008
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shilpa
i like that plant scene. Nice film
July 18, 2008
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rosywayup
this one should win. I hope it does anyway.
July 18, 2008
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tigercat
the directing was the best
July 18, 2008
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karen
i really like this one.
July 18, 2008
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mandy
please tell me this won???
July 18, 2008
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garymiser
Dont know about long shots but this was good.
July 18, 2008
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applejuice
great film. That plant scene, very well done. Did you have steadycam?
July 18, 2008
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robert
i can see talent here. good film
July 18, 2008
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mint
nice plant part.
July 18, 2008
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carlos
the film and music was awesome. The girls nice.
July 18, 2008
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traintofame
winner.
July 18, 2008
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runner
i like this. Good luck
July 18, 2008
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miller
if this was better marketed it would be very successful
July 18, 2008
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cinematool
great directing.
July 18, 2008
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theway
pleasant atmospehre. fantastic use of camerawork at the plant part
July 18, 2008
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janet
cool
July 18, 2008
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larry
i agree. nice film
July 18, 2008
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rimk
this has to win.
July 18, 2008
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edmus
I wrote the music for it. The whole film is here: http://www.myspace.com/edwardlock24
July 18, 2008
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leaf
has this been shortlisted? it should
July 18, 2008
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wendy
i think the maker of this film is a very sincere and honest man. The message was good and due to his virtues, the films emotion was executed perfectly.
July 18, 2008
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smith
again, beautiful music and good chemistry between the actors.
July 18, 2008
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joanna
very nicely done.
July 19, 2008
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alisonhunner
this was subtle but there was something about it that set it apart from the rest. The director knows how to convey emotion and draw us in.
This is my fav.
July 19, 2008
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richieabs
i agree with others about that PLANT scene. Great camerawork.
July 19, 2008
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louisegodfrey
this is one of the best ones. Hope it makes finals. Good work monsterman
July 19, 2008
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danny
powerful message about how one can be unaware of anothers vulnerability. Nicely shot and yeah, that plant scene was great.
Its been mentioned a few times now but i agree.
July 19, 2008
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greenberet
Monsterman shows a lot of patience with his directing which is the sign of a talented filmmaker. He allows the camera to sit on the actress and let the emotion shine. He then follows it up with a good mirror scene and moved in to her face as she contemplated. Wonderful technique.
July 19, 2008
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beefup
this was sad. :(
July 19, 2008
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andrewpatsworth
I dont think this is as great as people made out but it was ok. could have been better
July 19, 2008
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william
I heard great things too about this film and it was cool. Overhyped maybe but its still a well directed piece.
July 19, 2008
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bluefish
i liked it. thumbs up
July 19, 2008
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girlwearingrings
I dont know what she was so upset about but its a nice film.
July 19, 2008
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suit
i liked the morals. I have been depressed too and durign those times, words can have strong effect. Those words may finally tip one over the edge which is the message i got here. brilliant film by the way monsterman.
July 19, 2008
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cavemanrob
interesting. I wasnt too sure about the long shots at first but i had a second look and it was ok. The girl was pretty and acted well. The directing was good.
July 19, 2008
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winnie
My friends told me about this film and said it was great. I dont see the big deal but it was nice yeah.
July 19, 2008
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wonderland
nice piece of directing. well done monsterman
July 19, 2008
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gary
great film
July 21, 2008
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simone
good acting. directing is a bit slow though.
July 21, 2008
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donnathebabe
I liked this one. Great facials from the girl and good camerawork
July 21, 2008
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kate
good film
July 22, 2008
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helena
well done monsterman. I love this one. subtle but effecttive.
Twenty two year old Helen has never dated until she met Dan. Due to this she suffers from loneliness and depression and words are extremely sensitive to her. Dan is unaware of this...
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A Great little film very good angles and great acting by the girl in blue, Very true words can be very powerful whether we know it or not very well done on the film
June 19, 2008
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she has every right to be paranoid. no man goes for dinner with guys unless theyre called Elton. nice flick however, though to be honest i thought she outclassed the dress. kind of Matalanish for me
June 19, 2008
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Very good... The emotion comes through quite well.
Good acting and cool camera angles.
June 22, 2008
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I wanted to see more. Very professional camerawork there and captured atmosphere very well. Whoever discovers you will be the genius. What was the budget and how long is entire film?
July 18, 2008
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Very emotional film. I enjoyed it and its something i would love to watch after work. A perfect family film. Well done.
July 18, 2008
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nice. The plant shot was cool
July 18, 2008
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This was slow but very nice. Great ambience. Keep up the good work
July 18, 2008
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i dont know why she was so upset but that was nice. good acting and orginal directing
July 18, 2008
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that was great. The way u left the camera sitting on her captured the emotion brilliantly. You are different from other formulaic directors. I like it.
sammy
July 18, 2008
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i cried when i saw this. You have talent. good luck
July 18, 2008
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this was the best. very talented filmmaker here. I will look out for you in the future
July 18, 2008
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i am a filmmaker myself and i know talent. This was talent. Enough said.
July 18, 2008
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i kinda liked this one.
July 18, 2008
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Im not sure about the camera being so long on her but the plant scene was original. Good directing.
July 18, 2008
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after seein your scary film i had to see your others. This was very different. good though :)
July 18, 2008
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the girls very pretty. you directed her very well. you have great talent and i will look out for your films.
July 18, 2008
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mmmmm.....very nice film. Nice atmospehre.
July 18, 2008
Report this commentthewaytojungle
This was a nice film. Great music too. Suits the scene. Words can effect a person when they are vulnerable.
Not only was your film good but it also gave us a moral message. I love this one.
July 18, 2008
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can someone please tell me why this one wasnt in the final? This was brilliant. Im hoping for you mate. Good work. very cool PLANT SCENE too.
July 18, 2008
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i agree with rob. WHY WASNT THIS IN FINAL?? That plant scene was all that was needed to win. boo to virgin.
July 18, 2008
Report this commentgiraffe
the girls acting was superb. well done
July 18, 2008
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this was so sad. very cool film. wheres the longer version?? Hope you win.
July 18, 2008
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this was heartbreaking. Great little film. Hope you make finals.
July 18, 2008
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i loved the way u moved camera past plant. nice. thats girls nice too.
July 18, 2008
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this was fantastic camerawork.
July 18, 2008
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i found this one very interesting. Something about it draws me in. I think you have talent monsterman. Do you have your own site for your films? i would love to see them. Maybe youtube?
July 18, 2008
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awesome
July 18, 2008
Report this commentcutesocks
I almost cried when i heard the music. Very sad film
July 18, 2008
Report this commentmisschickonsticks
this should win.
July 18, 2008
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this is TALENT. good luck monsterman
July 18, 2008
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nice. very nice.
July 18, 2008
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i like that plant scene. Nice film
July 18, 2008
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this one should win. I hope it does anyway.
July 18, 2008
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the directing was the best
July 18, 2008
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i really like this one.
July 18, 2008
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please tell me this won???
July 18, 2008
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Dont know about long shots but this was good.
July 18, 2008
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great film. That plant scene, very well done. Did you have steadycam?
July 18, 2008
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i can see talent here. good film
July 18, 2008
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nice plant part.
July 18, 2008
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the film and music was awesome. The girls nice.
July 18, 2008
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winner.
July 18, 2008
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i like this. Good luck
July 18, 2008
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if this was better marketed it would be very successful
July 18, 2008
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great directing.
July 18, 2008
Report this commenttheway
pleasant atmospehre. fantastic use of camerawork at the plant part
July 18, 2008
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cool
July 18, 2008
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i agree. nice film
July 18, 2008
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this has to win.
July 18, 2008
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I wrote the music for it. The whole film is here: http://www.myspace.com/edwardlock24
July 18, 2008
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has this been shortlisted? it should
July 18, 2008
Report this commentwendy
i think the maker of this film is a very sincere and honest man. The message was good and due to his virtues, the films emotion was executed perfectly.
July 18, 2008
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again, beautiful music and good chemistry between the actors.
July 18, 2008
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very nicely done.
July 19, 2008
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this was subtle but there was something about it that set it apart from the rest. The director knows how to convey emotion and draw us in.
This is my fav.
July 19, 2008
Report this commentrichieabs
i agree with others about that PLANT scene. Great camerawork.
July 19, 2008
Report this commentlouisegodfrey
this is one of the best ones. Hope it makes finals. Good work monsterman
July 19, 2008
Report this commentdanny
powerful message about how one can be unaware of anothers vulnerability. Nicely shot and yeah, that plant scene was great.
Its been mentioned a few times now but i agree.
July 19, 2008
Report this commentgreenberet
Monsterman shows a lot of patience with his directing which is the sign of a talented filmmaker. He allows the camera to sit on the actress and let the emotion shine. He then follows it up with a good mirror scene and moved in to her face as she contemplated. Wonderful technique.
July 19, 2008
Report this commentbeefup
this was sad. :(
July 19, 2008
Report this commentandrewpatsworth
I dont think this is as great as people made out but it was ok. could have been better
July 19, 2008
Report this commentwilliam
I heard great things too about this film and it was cool. Overhyped maybe but its still a well directed piece.
July 19, 2008
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i liked it. thumbs up
July 19, 2008
Report this commentgirlwearingrings
I dont know what she was so upset about but its a nice film.
July 19, 2008
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i liked the morals. I have been depressed too and durign those times, words can have strong effect. Those words may finally tip one over the edge which is the message i got here. brilliant film by the way monsterman.
July 19, 2008
Report this commentcavemanrob
interesting. I wasnt too sure about the long shots at first but i had a second look and it was ok. The girl was pretty and acted well. The directing was good.
July 19, 2008
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My friends told me about this film and said it was great. I dont see the big deal but it was nice yeah.
July 19, 2008
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nice piece of directing. well done monsterman
July 19, 2008
Report this commentgary
great film
July 21, 2008
Report this commentsimone
good acting. directing is a bit slow though.
July 21, 2008
Report this commentdonnathebabe
I liked this one. Great facials from the girl and good camerawork
July 21, 2008
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good film
July 22, 2008
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well done monsterman. I love this one. subtle but effecttive.
July 22, 2008
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