Cute! Nice idea, I thought you could've done more with it, but your form- the editing was great. Made me laugh! Good job- please keep trying because even though this wasn't the best, it made me want to see more films from you, so rock on!
June 2, 2008
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lee
James you are a very funny man! first mooning on the moon next???
June 4, 2008
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Arse
Absolute crap
June 4, 2008
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AcousticNeon
If Monty Python were to make a come back this would be one of their sketches. Very funny, good timing and editing. Keep on filming.
June 4, 2008
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harneil
Very clever- At first the irony makes you question the plot- Did he crash on Earth and is he delirious...well yes, but big twist at the end
Hey James. I can see why Moon Shot UK is rocketing up the most viewed chart! I read the story like this: the space traveller aborted from the take off and was delerius (but still on earth!) So the twist at the end puts another spin on events!
Well performed, well edited, and you got a camera movement on a sfx shot, which ain't easy (nice tracking!)
Make another!
Leepy :-)
Brilliant! I didn't see the end coming at all. Genius!
June 13, 2008
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becka
this short was the best one iad seen so far!! i wasnt on the floor laughin bt i had a pretty big grin on my face when the guy walked past in the background i must say!!! xxx
pretty funny! i feel the end graphics wernt needed, some nice acting and a great idea! i really enjoyed!
June 26, 2008
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Granton
Made me smile. Loved the passer-by.
June 28, 2008
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mattmos
Very funny short film, the performance was great!
The vfx shot could do with some work though, the particles looked a bit out the box and dodgy. Lighting and texturing also needed a bit of work. Its the only thing that took me out of the story.
June 28, 2008
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luke
not that good!
June 29, 2008
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JustinCredible
Brilliant! Very funny.
June 30, 2008
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davandre
i thought it was alright. like others have said you could have done more with it, but all in all a good piece
June 30, 2008
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Andy frost
ok
June 30, 2008
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paul h.
very funny!
June 30, 2008
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shad
July 1, 2008
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Jen
I really liked it. Everything a short film should be. Well done.
And where, pray tell, is YOUR lavish production whitebear? cheap does not always equal bad.
me love :)
July 4, 2008
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Tavman
Made me chuckle - if the UK did a moon shot this is how it WOULD end up - a glorious dissaster on the beach at Skeggy!! Nice work, lets have some more.
July 6, 2008
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jameslundy
Very good short, which for some reason made me think of Monty Python....:D
July 6, 2008
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carterboy
didn't really do it for me - but, good luck any how :)
July 6, 2008
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dilbot
like it more reallistic than the 1969 nasa version
July 6, 2008
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ateday
moderatley good sketch for a bbc3 comedy show i'm guessing this guy has a bit of a following where ever he,s based wich would explain the myriad viewings and rave reviews can't believe anyone would laugh out loud watching this.nothing wrong with it but can't see it winning far more deserving movies than this one ie after you,stolen moments and a dogs best friend.
As I´ve said, nice for a sketch, but not cinematic at all. I think the diff between a skecth and a short film is that a short film is a film, that´s like, shorter, whereas a skecth like this, wants to be on Griff and Jones. Nice for what it is - TV - but as a film... give me a break. It´ll get thru!
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earl
my favourite short i have seen so far.
got a smile on my face after watching it,which shows it done the job.
very funny. loved it.
May 14, 2008
Report this commentwozy
Topman! You got out there and made something. I kinda liked this even though the concept was a simple one. Would like to see more by this guy :)
May 15, 2008
Report this commentloopyfilms
Made me laugh!
Nice one.
May 15, 2008
Report this commentThe Critic
is that the best you can do?
May 18, 2008
Report this commentmoog
Love that - very funny. What a great performance.
May 21, 2008
Report this commentCute! Nice idea, I thought you could've done more with it, but your form- the editing was great. Made me laugh! Good job- please keep trying because even though this wasn't the best, it made me want to see more films from you, so rock on!
June 2, 2008
Report this commentlee
James you are a very funny man! first mooning on the moon next???
June 4, 2008
Report this commentArse
Absolute crap
June 4, 2008
Report this commentAcousticNeon
If Monty Python were to make a come back this would be one of their sketches. Very funny, good timing and editing. Keep on filming.
June 4, 2008
Report this commentharneil
Very clever- At first the irony makes you question the plot- Did he crash on Earth and is he delirious...well yes, but big twist at the end
June 4, 2008
Report this commentSueper
Very funny. Well done, can we have more please?
June 4, 2008
Report this commentBeverly
Nice one :-) well done!
June 4, 2008
Report this commentertling
bring us back some rock!
June 4, 2008
Report this commentethlink
wow
June 4, 2008
Report this commentethlink
wow
June 4, 2008
Report this commentOldangrey
Made me chuckle make more please
June 4, 2008
Report this commentangel
more believable than the other moon landing! fab
June 4, 2008
Report this commentLini
Hehe...that was funni!
June 4, 2008
Report this commentJUZ
superb!
June 5, 2008
Report this commentBumble
cool it was really good;)
June 5, 2008
Report this commentLeepy
Hey James. I can see why Moon Shot UK is rocketing up the most viewed chart! I read the story like this: the space traveller aborted from the take off and was delerius (but still on earth!) So the twist at the end puts another spin on events!
Well performed, well edited, and you got a camera movement on a sfx shot, which ain't easy (nice tracking!)
Make another!
Leepy :-)
June 6, 2008
Report this commentandys
Splendid!
June 6, 2008
Report this commentinfamous
its just okay, nothing special.
June 8, 2008
Report this commentadamasambou
.:'+':. Very Good.:'+':.
NOW
CHECKOUT
MY
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FILM (TYPE IN THE FOLLOWING LINK)
http://www.virginmediashorts.co.uk/film/1577988014
June 8, 2008
Report this commentlynne
That was really really good, i wish i'd made it :-)
June 9, 2008
Report this commentthat's just great... genuinely funny.
June 9, 2008
Report this commentkate
really good well done theres some bitter people out there but they're just jealous!
June 11, 2008
Report this commentrevgoomba
Brilliant! I didn't see the end coming at all. Genius!
June 13, 2008
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this short was the best one iad seen so far!! i wasnt on the floor laughin bt i had a pretty big grin on my face when the guy walked past in the background i must say!!! xxx
June 13, 2008
Report this commentson-of-Jabba
HUH?
June 15, 2008
Report this commentCreationEditor
I love this one!!!
June 17, 2008
Report this commentLind
Made me smile from start to end and even after it had finished. Simple idea but funny. Well done
June 18, 2008
Report this commentit was ok. im not sure why everyone is going mad for it. maybe its just me
June 18, 2008
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for another view on planet UK check out my vid, type in 'Good Morning Briatin'
June 19, 2008
Report this commentSamLambert
http://www.virginmediashorts.co.uk/film/1600082786
June 20, 2008
Report this commentchilli78
Nice one, well played. Made me laugh!
June 22, 2008
Report this commentjustme
Very good one ! Made me laugh!
June 22, 2008
Report this commentborderlinmedia
lmao this is excellent very original!
June 22, 2008
Report this commentWindsailor
very good dude, very Palin-esk performance. cracked me up the voice over about the wee-wee tube
June 23, 2008
Report this commentlynndog
more irritating than amusing
June 24, 2008
Report this commentwellg0sh
pretty funny! i feel the end graphics wernt needed, some nice acting and a great idea! i really enjoyed!
June 26, 2008
Report this commentGranton
Made me smile. Loved the passer-by.
June 28, 2008
Report this commentmattmos
Very funny short film, the performance was great!
The vfx shot could do with some work though, the particles looked a bit out the box and dodgy. Lighting and texturing also needed a bit of work. Its the only thing that took me out of the story.
June 28, 2008
Report this commentluke
not that good!
June 29, 2008
Report this commentJustinCredible
Brilliant! Very funny.
June 30, 2008
Report this commentdavandre
i thought it was alright. like others have said you could have done more with it, but all in all a good piece
June 30, 2008
Report this commentAndy frost
ok
June 30, 2008
Report this commentpaul h.
very funny!
June 30, 2008
Report this commentWaynetank
shad
July 1, 2008
Report this commentJen
I really liked it. Everything a short film should be. Well done.
July 1, 2008
Report this commentmanalivestudios
Pretty funny little number! Like the bit when a random bloke walks past and says hi. Check out our entry, "Mr. Alice", and let us know what you think.
July 2, 2008
Report this commentcruciblepics
Funny one.
July 2, 2008
Report this commentfranny
Nice one!
July 3, 2008
Report this commentChris Baldwin
I really like this film it is saturated in character! Apart from my own film this is my favourite by far.lol.
Check it out.
www.virginmediashorts.com/film/1632719538
Chris Baldwin
July 3, 2008
Report this commentVery good!
I loved the wee wee tube line.
I made a funny too, it is here
http://www.virginmediashorts.co.uk/film/1632709982
July 3, 2008
Report this commentwhitebear2008
Another rubbish one, cheap, boring... so far I'm starting to see more rubbish then good.
July 4, 2008
Report this commentmoog
And where, pray tell, is YOUR lavish production whitebear? cheap does not always equal bad.
me love :)
July 4, 2008
Report this commentTavman
Made me chuckle - if the UK did a moon shot this is how it WOULD end up - a glorious dissaster on the beach at Skeggy!! Nice work, lets have some more.
July 6, 2008
Report this commentjameslundy
Very good short, which for some reason made me think of Monty Python....:D
July 6, 2008
Report this commentcarterboy
didn't really do it for me - but, good luck any how :)
July 6, 2008
Report this commentdilbot
like it more reallistic than the 1969 nasa version
July 6, 2008
Report this commentateday
moderatley good sketch for a bbc3 comedy show i'm guessing this guy has a bit of a following where ever he,s based wich would explain the myriad viewings and rave reviews can't believe anyone would laugh out loud watching this.nothing wrong with it but can't see it winning far more deserving movies than this one ie after you,stolen moments and a dogs best friend.
July 9, 2008
Report this commentLeepy
As I´ve said, nice for a sketch, but not cinematic at all. I think the diff between a skecth and a short film is that a short film is a film, that´s like, shorter, whereas a skecth like this, wants to be on Griff and Jones. Nice for what it is - TV - but as a film... give me a break. It´ll get thru!
July 18, 2008
Report this commentLeepy
Okay, that last comment was a bit harsh. But as a few people have said, it does look like a TV sketch rather than something more... cinematic.
July 19, 2008
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